Hi today I was told to do a self reflection on my public speaking and a tiny bit of sombody else’s speech.
What I like about my public speaking is my conclusion I thought I did pretty good on that espiacilly the part where I said “Trot on down to your local stable and spend time with horses it will be the best thing you do all day!” I thought that was a great ending to my speach, I even memorized it!
Now what I could of done to improve was my points some of my writing made absolutly no sense and while I was speaking I needed to fix it in the middle of my speach like I said “When you don’t muck out stalls it’s a tiny bit neglected because if you were a horse would you like to be in a stall full of poop your whole life?” Now I kept most of it but dosent the “Its a tiny but neglected” make no sense? Yeah it really doesnt.
I liked Maia’s public speaking because it was really good and her speech made total sense in everything she said. It’s true! We really shouldn’t have homework!!
I think this person needed to improve their speaking because they kind of spoke really emotionless and they need to have a lot more emotion in speaking because you would not speak to your freinds like you have no emotion ever.
This is me doing my speech